CASE 02 · METHOD TEARDOWN

One enquiry, read properly before anyone answers it.

The sender, the firm and the e-mail below are invented for this page. This is a teardown of a method, not a client story — no result figures are claimed anywhere on it.

Most enquiries do not fail at the answer. They fail earlier: a price is guessed from an e-mail that never said enough, and three weeks later the job turns out to be a different job. Triage is the step that refuses to skip that gap. Here is the same enquiry before and after it.

What arrives

Written at 23:41 by someone describing a real problem badly — which is how real enquiries arrive. Nothing here is wrong with the sender.

What triage turns it into

The same text, restated as decisions and gaps. Note what is absent: no price, no promise, no feasibility claim.

The sample stays in English on every language version — it is the exhibit; the analysis around it is what gets translated.

The four rules doing the work

None of them are clever. They are simply applied every time, which is the part a busy inbox cannot do.

rule 01 — Name what is missing before naming a price

The card ends with an explicit list of what would be needed to quote. If that list is empty, the quote is a guess wearing a number. Three items here — the tool name, one representative folder, and the person who signs off on data protection — are worth more than any estimate written without them.

rule 02 — Repeat the sender's constraint as a decision, not a note

"Data cannot leave France" is not a preference to acknowledge politely at the end of a reply. It removes an entire class of solutions before design starts. Triage moves it from the middle of a paragraph to a line that changes the architecture.

rule 03 — Mark third-party personal data on sight

The documents belong to the firm's own clients. That makes the firm the controller and us the processor, and it means a written agreement comes before the first real file, not after the pilot goes well. Spotting this on day one is cheaper than discovering it in week three.

rule 04 — The next step must be smaller than the project

A scoping pass on twenty anonymised folders is something both sides can afford to be wrong about. A full quote on four hundred folders sight-unseen is not. The suggested step is deliberately the smallest one that produces a real answer.

What changed between the two cards

  1. The request was named in our own vocabulary — document processing plus private deployment — instead of being left as "AI for receipts".
  2. Two services were explicitly ruled out, so nobody pitches what was not asked for.
  3. The missing information became a numbered list instead of a vague feeling that something was unclear.
  4. The sender's compliance constraint was promoted from a passing sentence to an architectural decision.
  5. The legal role — controller and processor — was written down while the enquiry was still an e-mail.
  6. The reply now has one job: ask three questions and offer a small paid step.

What this actually improves

Not speed of typing. The gain is that the same enquiry produces the same reading on a Tuesday night as it would on a calm Friday morning, and that a quote is never sent while three unknowns are still open. That is a smaller claim than "saves you hours", and it is one we can stand behind.

How it runs in practice

The enquiry lands, the model produces the card against a fixed checklist, and a person reads both before anything is sent. The card is a draft for a human, never an outgoing message — nothing reaches the sender without being read by us first.

What this page does not claim

  • No client agreed to this, because the client does not exist. Nothing here is a testimonial.
  • No time or money saved is claimed — nothing was measured with a real firm.
  • The card does not decide anything. It prepares a decision that a person makes.
  • Nothing is sent automatically. There is no auto-reply anywhere in this method.

Send us a badly written enquiry on purpose

Describe your own situation as loosely as you like. You get the same card back — what we understood, what is missing, what we would refuse to quote until we see it.

Ask for a triage of my own enquiry

contact@castel.studio